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that first example ws from invisible prey by john sandford he has a weird writing style tho and it was messed up cus i typed it fast lol any ways ...

there not bad as long as you keep it in scene and make sure you just skim over the deep dark details if you know what i mean hit the ...

like here is an example. of another book "weather..." lucas said impatently. "lucas" weather snapped. "look around, if you can get your head out of your but long enofe." letty ...

hey guys im perty new here any ways mabey some of you will be able to right im trying to right my first book its going realy well so far ...