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KTW, Thank you so much for this review. It's wonderful to know the many things I could fix with this. I am quite into my book and once again I ...

Note: The lineage is quite confusing if you don't have the family tree in front of you. For the beginning of chapter one I only include four people. Their connection ...

Very nice overall. I only found one thing, I believe. Choosing not to reply, I laid back beside him and closed my eyes, imaging Bryce twenty years from now, I ...

Thanks for the comment! I'm not really sure if I'm SUPPOSED to comment back, but I guess I will anyways (??). So here is the story behind the poem. I've ...

Oh my. I absolutely adored this poem. It was 100% right with how Google is used and looked upon. Very nice style and use of words. I do agree with ...

Note: This story hasn't been worked on for months. I'm currently working on something a bit more privately. I don't like this much, but I'm hoping to get some good ...

I thought it was very good, from the beginning to the end. It was very easy to picture, very well described. They were all solid characters and you had me ...

I thought this was a very good poem. It had depth and meaning among the words. I'm not sure if I can find anything wrong with it, though I'm probably ...

The feeling I constantly experience, I feel it daily, painfully, with the tears in my eyes, They fall out, drip down my cheeks in streams, My eyes sting with all ...