chellelynn

I think this was done beautifully! I don't know anyone who is transgender, so I also don't know at all what it feels like to think this about yourself, but ...

These are great! Autumn is my favorite season, and I think you captured it in these photos quite well. The last photo isn't showing up, so I can't comment on ...

1 - You got his hair dead on haha. Nicely done. I also like his eyebrows, his eyes, and the rose! As others have mentioned, I don't really like the ...

This needs way more feeling. I feel like it was written in boredom, with not enough understanding of such a sensitive issue. Self mutilation affects millions of people, every single ...

This is a very interesting piece of work. I really like the idea you have. The people above me have mentioned most of what I was thinking of saying anyways, ...

Hello! Great plot so far, it's very intriguing and makes the reader want to read more. I love the way you write, the way you use your words. Please, please, ...

This isn't the actual title of the novel. It doesn't have one yet, actually, so I just used the Chapter One title instead. x. 001 The Sand That Falls The ...

I'm going to start by saying I'm right crap at reviews, which is why I never give them haha. But I'm bored and this one caught my eye. I really ...

Thank you both so so so much! SaraAnne, you gave some very great advice that I definately intend on using haha and TalulahBelle, you definately gave me some much needed ...

I'm not sure this is the place to put this question and if it isn't, feel free to move it! Basically, I really suck at writing dialogue. Actually, I'm reading ...

Here is me: In Amsterdam: In Paris: Infront of Arc de Triomphe:

This always happens to me. I have this desperate urge to write, I crave writing, and yet I cannot think of a single idea and thus, cannot write anything! I ...

wow, Moriah, that was actually VERY helpful! I hadn't even noticed how I always use the same words twice in a sentence, which is strange since I can't stand that ...

thank you very much!

Really! Thank you so much! I'm sort of stuck at the moment though, as I'm not entirely sure of the best way to sort of "switch scenes." I wanted to ...