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Re: Blogging?
I write a travel blog that you can feel free to check out. It's not for stories or anything, I've kind of turned my passion for writing into writing about ...
Jul 13, 2012 -
Re: Help with a name
I voted for Ren. Of the three, it's unique but at least an actual name. Rhode looks nice, but it's not nice sounding. And Sunshine? I'm sorry, but are you ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Idea I have....should I continue?
This reminds me too much of the book Clockwork Angel by Cassandra Clare. While your idea is different than the main storyline of her book, much of what you described ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Blogs!
Those are both really interesting! Matt, I've actually always been very interested in Buddhism. Lauren, I love your writing! I also think I might try out writing a poem every ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Advice on Character Names
I like all of the boy first names apart from John(too plain). As for the girl names, they just aren`t my favorite. Alexis isn`t bad, but I don`t like Aimee, ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Blogs!
I don't know if there is a topic like this yet. I was wondering whether anyone on here has personal blogs through blogspot or tumblr or anything else other than ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: The Sand That Falls, Chapter 3
Eight years ago, Samantha and her brother, Evan Chase, lived through a murder that killed the rest of their family. Parents and sibling dead, the Chase siblings have moved through ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Attacked.
Hi there, I'm Chelle! I have to be honest with you here. While this has the potential to be absolutely amazing, it's kind of boring right now. There is so ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: The Bucket List - Prologue
Hey there, I'm Chelle! This is beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this prologue, but there's just a few minor things that caught my eye(I'll try not to repeat the ones ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Only time(2)
She's too trusting. It's one big thing that irks me with this novel. She doesn't question, she doesn't put up any kind of a fight. I know she is supposed ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Words Not Spoken Chapter 1
This is a really interesting story so far! I like how by the end of the chapter, the reader still doesn't really understand what is going on/what this mind collaborator ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: The Sand That Falls, Chapter 2
Thank you so much! I don't get many reviews due to the length of my posts, unfortunately. You'll never believe it, but this is much shorter than the original story ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: I Survived-Chapter One
Oh goodness, this is so sad! I definately think it started out a bit boring and got way better at the end. I did notice a few small grammatical errors, ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: The Writings of a Stereotypical Girl (Prologue)
When I first started reading this, I couldn't decide whether or not I liked it. By the time I finished, I realized I did. I do think you could make ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: The Sand That Falls, Chapter 2
I have to admit, this chapter is a bit long. I've written a few more already as well, and it's turning into one of those long chapter novels! That is ...
Nov 23, 2010
