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Re: Hola!
Hello olivia! Welcome to the site! I'm sure you'll fit right in with us here...we're all writing junkies! *Hands cookie* I like playing the flute too, but I wouldn't consider ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Hi there!
I hope you have tons and tons of fun here! I think you'll get published! *hands cookie* Merry Christmas, by the way. I think you'll have a great time, and ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Bon Jour
Welcome to YWS Sammy! I hope you enjoy the site and find a ton of new adventures in stories and find new friends! Feel free to add me when you ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Pandoras Box
Wow. The way you portrayed these feelings running through the MC was great. But why did the MC kill her family? Was she holding a grudge against them? How did ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Warriors: Moonhigh Chapter 1 Part 2
I stalked through the forest, crashing through fern clumps and Elder bushes, being scratched by branches of thorn patches, nettles, and brambles. Somehow, I had always found myself circling back ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Warriors: Moonhigh Chapter 1 Part 1
Kittypets weren't respected by the Clans. We were often scared away, chased out, maybe the occasional wound or two from a vicious, bloodthirsty cat. My brother, Mason (preferably called Jango) ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Warriors: Moonhigh
I stared at my brother's chest rise and fall, rise and fall, rise and fall. i scoffed at the Clans. Who did they think they were? Just because they had ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Kiss the Rain
i enjoyed reading this wonderful peice. it is very expressive and you really let out your emotions :). i could hear your tone in my head as i read it. ...
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
very nice. i love it. good job! "tears thick like blood..." i like it! 8)
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Magic Kingdom Fireworks!
beautiful. just beautiful
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Kat's Carrousel of Reviews! {Le Catarin} Now Open!
this is a very well written poem. i liked it! the way the words flowed was excellent, as were the discriptive words. Yiruma would have liked the way you were ...
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: Kat's Carrousel of Reviews! {Le Catarin} Now Open!
very nice. i love the way it flows and the way you were inspired to do it by Yiruma. this is a very well written poem and you used excellent ...
Aug 8, 2009
