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Hmm. Interesting the way you told this story, but may I ask what had become of the boy? Where did he go? And what do the sun and moon have ...

Ha! Cute! It reminds me of a sonnet I once read...I an't remember the name of it, but it was by Shel Silverstien and was about spaghetti. Anyway, you should ...

Aww, come on, Hoodie! Tell us more! Favorite color? What do you enjoy writing? How long have you been on the site? Post some more! Just hit the edit button ...

Ahhh, yes. the good ol' yearbook. Well a few people I must point out... Aet Lindling: Wow! Every time the chat room is empty, you're there :xd: Thanks for keeping ...

Voted...Sorry, Nate. I'm just not for the badge system. It'll make things a little more complicated for older YWS members who feel like the color system is home. ~Cheez_Burger~

Welcome to the site! Hope you enjoy!

Another great work! I must say though, you did repeat yourself when Jared asked for Alexis' name. You'll see :) I, again, am waiting to read the rest of this ...

Wow, Ellie! Great story plan! I absoloutely LOVE how this is going! I believe you should add some more people in chat the next time the MC logs in...or hacks ...

Haha! Kammie doesn't bite at all! Snoink...not so much! Have fun! ~Cheez_Burger~

Wow! What a great prolouge! Is this your first piece? If so, then outstanding! I love the detains of you raking your claws down his arm! I can't wait to ...

Ah! Silence of the lambs=Scary!!!!!! (Very scary indeed!) I like rain too! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: I like elephants+aliens...can you tell? :D :xd: ~C

Wow. This is an excellent piece with such emotion, it made me cry, remembering how I learned to pley the guitar and piano with my grandfather. All I can say ...

I agree! Going over the story a few times to check errors is something I've found very helpful in the past, and it also helps to see if you can ...

Holy Cow! You did a terrific job on this piece! I was very impressed with the way you portrayed the characters, and I picture the Dih as an overside Bear/Sloth ...

Wow! I haven't been writing that long... By the way, is that you in the picture? You're pretty! I'm so excited to see some of your new pieces and help ...