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Well Elli, here's how I hack facebook and such. Okay, start off with Alli trying to hack Nate's email and the security question pops up. Then, have Alli warm up ...

I like it! In fact, I went to see that movie not to long ago...Very descriptive! Keep it up!! ~Cheez_Burger~

I tattle on...ummmmm...I know this one...I tattle on RED, though she is no longer with us, she's still my sister and I loves her :)

Okay... I like guitar, piano, music, and purple. Show me whatcha got!

I disagree EXTREMELY with this last post. You know, lots of poems DO take 10 minutes to write, I'm not saying all, but most do. So, the one part I ...

Very good job! I know exactly what this is like, and i see where you're coming from! Bravo! Encore! ~*Cheez_Burger*~

You repeated notice a bit too much! Other than that, good work! ~*Cheez_Burger*~

I agree with the first post. The ryhme does sound a bit forced, and to me, it's hard to figure out what this poem is trying to portray. But, I ...

Marmalade jars - Pristine preserves, Containing my joy With solid glass curves

Well, I'll try not to repeat what others have said, so I'll go with this: I disagree. With all of these punctuation errors that they say, I understand this completely. ...

Ah! I can't read this! Divide it into chapters! It's to long! *runs away screaming

Oh, Hawkie! This is the most beautiful thing I've ever read! Bravo, bravo! Encore! ~Cheez_Burger~

Wow. I wonder what what the note said? Was it a suicide note? Was it a love note? You're killing me here! I liked the way you did the stanza...But ...

Emotion. Tons and tons of it. I love it, the bitter tiny tangy tint of mystery in it. Wonderful :) :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: ~Cheez_Burger~

Hmm. I like the piece. I'm not going to repeat what others have said before, because I'm thinking the same, but the syllables don't exactly flow to gracefully...Perhaps you could ...