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Re: Diary of a Seventh grade Girl
Just as everyone else has said, you may want to avert your attention to a blog, that would be more fitting for this sort of thing. However, if you wanted ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: I Hate Emoticons
Can I just ask why this is in non-fiction and not in the lounge? If you put this into an essay it could be interesting... haha *resists urge to insert ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Believing is just the beginning
Howdy! Okay, so I really like the idea behind this piece, I found a couple quick grammatical fixes, but besides that the only suggestion I have is trying to exclude ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Autism, Tourette's OCD: A Misunderstood Truth
Hey, there! I'm Shannon. I really liked you're piece, one of my best friends has a mild case of OCD, and I have a classmate with Autism who has touched ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: In A Year
I like this work. It is thought-provoking. The world My world Is rocked back and forth. (I like this line. It works well with the rest of the poem, suggesting ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: In A Year
In a year. The world My world If you say "the" world you can't say that this is your world... Or put a comma.. Is rocked back and forth. World---forth--->not ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: I Love You, Lame-o
Thank you all for your reviews! I've edited it a little bit, but I think I've got to really do some work to add in more sensory details. Thanks again ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: In A Year
In a year. The world My world Is rocked back and forth. Death approaches closer For a friend of mine But which one? Is that the point? Will it not ...
Dec 25, 2008 -
Re: I Drew a Smiley on my Knee
Okay, I liked it. The whole thing was cute and quirky-- just how I like my poetry! The only thing I have a problem with is that last paragraph, it ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: I Love You, Lame-o
Tell me what you think, I'm not much of a poet so I'd like some feedback! The party was loud. My head was silent. The faces were unfamiliar But when ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: When you smile
This was really cute. I never know what to say when reviewing poetry, because I think it's really just up to the poet, and I didn't see anything stand out ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Life as a Ninth Grader (and on)
Okay, I know this sounds harsh, but this seems like it needs a lot of work. I only read the first few paragraphs, and everything was SO repetitive. I advise ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Give me your tired, your poor, your huddled masses...
no rush, just would like some feedback! muchas gracias -Shannon
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Need a review? Well, I love doing them!
nothing urgent, just would like some feedback. graciass! shannon
Oct 24, 2008 -
Re: Coolest T-Shirts Ever!
You guys! Threadless = love! Check it outtt. http://www.threadless.com?streetteam=Salsashanno There are seriously like 876807698769876 shirts on here that I am in love with. Plus, its lots o' fun to g
Oct 23, 2008