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I could really use some help. I'm struggling with it, a lot. It's a little cheesy, but I'm trying to move past that. Anyone who is willing to give me ...

Hey, everyone. I'm writing a story, "Who would've thought?" and I posted the first two parts, but I really appreciate some feedback if anyone had a little extra time on ...

Oh my goodness, it's brilliance!! It really looks like a bear, and I love the position it's legs are, that makes it more realistic, I think. I love that you ...

cuuute! I love babies. But, of course, who doesn't?

Wow! These are all fantastic! My favorite is the one of the crane, his neck and beak are fantastic. The horse and the mini cooper are also very impressive, I ...

These are ALL beautiful. This only makes me more envious of the people who have artistic ability, I posses none. Your colors are beautiful, and I love that you your ...

Although this was beautifully written, I was left feeling very confused. It lacks a plot, and the story changes drastically from the beginning to the end, and it's very short ...

Let me start off my saying that this was a phenomenal piece and probably one of the best I've read on this site in a while. Your descriptions were amazing, ...

Everyone has already mentioned that this resembles the Twilight series, you get the picture, but that's what I was reminded of the whole time reading it. But, anyway, I really ...

Once I entered the front room again, Kate had already moved to the other side of the table, I think she could tell that I didn’t want to talk to ...

Wow, this is super cute! I love Ron and Hermione, and I was a little bit disappointed that we didn't get to see more of their relationship in book 7, ...

I definatley would not want to pay to get rid of ads. The YWS ads are not very prominent, either, they are easily ignored. I think that this should stay ...

Done a lot of tweeking here, it's pretty different from when I first posted it. As always, I'd love some reviews! As my favorite song danced out of the stereo, ...

This was great! I totally agree, I live in the US, though, but I feel for your troubles across the pond! I would really, really, REALLY love to be a ...

Alrighty, so, I thought this was really a great poem, but I have one problem. It seems like your going with a certian rhyme and rythm (did I spell that ...