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Welcome, Rachel. Here at YWS we have two main rules: 1) No chatspeak. We like proper English. 2) Keep the 2:1 ratio alive. For everyone one literary work you post, ...

Hey there and welcome. I see you've already gotten the rules, just try and stick to them! You like Twilight, eh? Well, most people here aren't too fond of it, ...

Hey there, Mary! I know it probably seems a little tough to get around on here, but spend a little time on the site and you'll know it like the ...

Ok- here's my advice: You keep mentioning Marley & Me. Go with that, but not exactly. Write the story in a dog's point of view as they watch their master ...

Haha, these are great ones you guys. I have a cousin who is the same age as me, same school, same grade, we don't get along super well. Long story ...

True. The user below me doesn't brush their teeth regularly.

Ohh, this was good, Merry! You can really explain things well, I'm not so good with that and find myself often relying on dialogue. I'm glad I came back to ...

Hiya! My name's Shannon, I'll be reviewing your piece. I'm just going to stick any comments/suggested changes in bold right in the text, okay? If they're changes as opposed to ...

Hellooo. I'm going to put any suggested changes/comments in bold, alrighty? Chapter One In the early 1800s a group of young men, decided that they needed more in life. A ...

Hey there, and welcome! I can see you're already getting along well with Rosey! You like realistic fiction? Me too! That's mostly what I read, occasionally I pick some Sci-Fi ...

Hey, Jazz! If you like writing and critiquing you'll fit in perfectly! Just stick to those rules Rosey laid out and we'll love you forever. Is that flyleaf in your ...

Welcome! It's pretty easy to navigate yourself around the site once you spend a little time here. As long as you know the forums are for stuff like this, chit ...

Hey, Pink, nice to meet you! You'll probably find plenty of people to review your work for you. As Rosey said, the "Will Review for Food" thread is a good ...

What IS up, my homeskillets? As most of you know, I've been around for a while, but I've just become really active in the past few weeks. And, I have ...

Yes! That scene was fantastic! I agree it could've been shortened, but I still enjoyed it. The day I saw it I was kind of in the mood for that ...