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Now this is what I like to see! What a feel-good story! I was moved to tears... When is the movie coming out?

Lol, I wonder where you got the idea to name Farfetch'd "Dux"? =P Loving it. XD

I totally got the sensation that she was like a robot, doing stuff automatically, but also like an animal, doing stuff by instinct, and less human than usual. The "savior"'s ...

The city's description is total awesomeness. Lide Mad said, the latter of that centence could use a little tweaking. Elsewise, it's an excellent continuation. Now to part IV!

Total coolness. Myth did pretty much point out all the grammar/spelling issues. I want to read the next bit, but luckily you've already written it so I'll go read it ...

I'm afraid I have to agree I think the tail doesn't look quite right, being the same thickness all the way down. Aside from that it's a real nice piece ...

So, I found the prologue really fun to read, especially with the ice cream. ^^ I like what you told me in chat about the future of the story, so ...

New member here. Mattster or Matt or whatever you choose to call me. Basically I joined because I've enjoyed a lot of stories on this site and decided it was ...