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Re: Poke'mon Allstars 0.01
Sensing the youth's unwillingness, Rix put his badge away again. Looks like he was on his own. As the crowds gathered outside, Rix ended up nearby the TV station. Glancing ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
=D Thanks Kitty for your consistent advice and comments, and Adam and Isdada for your help too. On to the subject of titles. "Underworld Breakout"... bit stupid. What do you ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
Well, first things first, I made some minor edits to the previous instalment. Second things second, Mattisdada, you stud! Welcome to our humble YWS! We go way back. And yes, ...
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
And we're back from the commercial break. Get time to stretch your legs? Lovely. ===================================================== As PONCHO closes the door on his way out of the lab, we see ULTRA
Aug 1, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
Heh, that's true. Gladman and Poncho are just recurring minor characters though, and I don't even know if Gene and Wilde will return after Underworld Breakout. Anyway, under the advice ...
Jul 31, 2007 -
Re: Poke'mon Allstars 0.01
The youth entered the Pokemon Mart, where Rix stood in the corner, eyeing the people who entered. This kid had a Dratini following him. Innocent enough , Rix figured, but ...
Jul 31, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
Hmm... I've certainly bollocksed this up. See, I edited the previous post whenever I had new script to add, so as not to double-post. However, this meant that there was ...
Jul 30, 2007 -
Re: Whore of the Wind, Girl of the Tide
Wow. I was impressed by that, and I'm not easily impressed... Look! A blue car! Seriously though, I really can't see anything that needs to be improved. So all I ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Mattster arranged his five Spatulas into the throwing weapon that was the result of the ancient Five Spatula magic. "Umm... oh. Spatulas, don't be pointy." The spatulas immediately complied with ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Mattster woke up. "WHOA!!!" POPSICLE HANGOVER. Mattster lay there for at least another hour before he got up and looked around. "Where the heck is everybody?" Everybody, it transpired, was ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: Poke'mon Allstars 0.01
The first thing anyone noticed when entering Jubilife City was the massive Global Trade Station. "So you're saying, this place is hooked up to EVERY major city in the world?" ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: No title yet.
Very nice introduction. I did see a few minor spelling errors, but nothing too serious: No sound was made to offend this moment, no breath was brought forth for fear ...
Jul 26, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
Mmm indeed. I think an abridged version will be in a later story arc. XD EDIT: Moar! (I edited the last bit slightly, as I remembered Infra needs to hold ...
Jul 26, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
Good question. I'll explain a little about the orbs. The orbs are actually storage devices for massive amounts of supernatural energy. They can be filled with energy either by receiving ...
Jul 26, 2007 -
Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld
Back once again. ===================================================== At the base of the mountain that INFRA and ULTRA fought on, INFRA sits on a rock. INFRA: Replaced? Replaced for some second-rater
Jul 25, 2007
