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Easy now, Kwest, we are just going to land as politicians. Yes…we are not leaders of a rebellion, thought Kwest. Who knows if the Emperors already knew who Lira and ...

Something wasn't right here. As they ran after this rumbling thing, Infra looked around the group, wondering whether he could confide in any of them. Elyn - Nah. Too devious, ...

"Well, I've got nothing better to do," Infra said. Colin shook his head. "Just wait up!" he exclaimed. "I still don't think we can trust the monkey and its... thing!" ...

Lira and Kwest took the HC speeder to the coordinates that were provided to them. This might sound better as "to the coordinates they had been provided with". The rendezvous ...

Ah, this looks like the right one. XD She let out a pleased sigh. "A pleased sigh" somehow doesn't flow ... any other word you could replace "pleased" with? “Not ...

“Yes, because we’re here,” Kwest said, slowing the speeder and stopping it in front a lonely, dark shack, made of nothing but dull, old durasteel sheets and barely held together ...

This is the right chapter, isn't it? Chapter 2? You may want to change the title of each one in the forum, just to say which chapter it is. :) ...

Mattster looked at the object in his hands. It resembled the handle of a sword. "Evidently," he said to Bella and Heather, who were looking at it too, "you hold ...

I... am on lists? This is an outrage! People should not want to meet me! 1: Kit 2: nuttychooky 3: bubblewrapped 4: Jabber_the_Hut 5: Insanityabounds 6: Adam_Atlantian 7: RED 8: ...

Especially Kwest, whom the clones were created after. I found this sentence to be a bit too "to the point". I'd spread it out and make it a little interesting, ...

*Lol, ok. I'll try and get us on the right track.* Elyn stood grinning at the humans. Neither grinned back. Infra watched the proceedings with mild interest. "So, like I ...

Tamia stood, frozen. The pot that had been, until recently, boiling broth over the fire hung heavily from her hand, dripping slowly the remains of its contents. This paragraph seemed ...

As quickly as he'd fallen, Elyn scampered back up the tree and hid in the branches. "Oh, brilliant!" Infra growled. "You've just given us away!" " I've given us away?" ...

kitty15> Yeah, that sounds fine. A loud crash came from the barn, and Infra quickly tossed the monkey-boy back up into the tree before leaping up after him. Peering through ...

Dynamo> Yep, you sure can. Nutty, Squallz, Kitty, Adam> Welcome! Grif> LOL. Nice ;) There was light ahead. Moving towards it, Infra found himself out of the forest and a ...