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Alright tx. I have no internet in my house so it takes awhile to post things! I'll get them done though as soon as i have time! SOZ!

Its like the times of kings and queens!!! Of course i'd understand if it had been nowadays and a parent had given their daughter a dagger, but still. its fantasy! ...

omg! i'm a horse person too but i guess i wasn't really paying attention that day... lol. Well she has a stallion cuz shes a rich girl cuz her dad's ...

4. Jord The boy opened his eyes and saw a girl and a pup staring down at him. He sat up with a start and looked frightened. He was sitting ...

ok ok. alright. i have it done but i just have to post it! I'll do it soon!! and then comment again because i will have changed a lot of ...

It was dark all around but Nami knew the way. She slid forward a couple more steps until she reached the candle that she had used so many times years ...

Alright. Tx guys. I'll edit it and then repost. please keep up with the critiques!

Wowwowowowowowowow!! thats a totally awesome piece of writing. you've probably already heard that be4 but still! i wanna keep reading but i cant find ch. 6 or 7. where are ...

Continuation... Nami knew that arguing would only make things worse so she followed without resisting him. All the house servants watched with curiosity as he pulled her up to the ...

3. Preparing for the Journey After Nami had snuck breakfast for Goneck into the barn she ran into her room. Helena was sitting on her bed anxiously waiting for her. ...

2. The Appearance of a Long Lost Past Nami and Helena had done well this time but Nami wasn’t sure how well she would do the next time she did ...

Rule 2: Make a good first impression. I walked into school the next morning with a bounce in my step and a large smile plastered on my face. As I ...

The story is a bit off. First it does need a bit of spacing. And second, although you mentioned in your story that things were happening too fast for the ...

It was short and sweet but not very creative. But as a first its not all that bad. It is a bit cliche but nowadays a lot of things are ...

Rule 1: Know yourself. Now I know that I wasn’t the most attractive girl in school. That was for sure. Unlike my sister, I was just an ordinary fourteen, soon ...