chayonz

i have one question. I understand that it is vital to stick to one character ie their point of view, thoughts and feelings. But does it confuse and ruin the ...

ok tx! I'll be sure to do it. tx again!

8. Rhutherum Nimbus Hart barged into Nami’s room and yelled, “Come look at this!” and rushed outside as fast as she had come. Nami woke with a start. She looked ...

omg!! yay!! Im soo glad you finally wrote this! I was waiting forever!! I don't really see any corrections that need to be made. I'm not the type of person ...

wowowowowowowowowow! All u guys are like major writers. Me on the other hand would love to say the same for myself but am truthfully unable to. I have never finished ...

is there more??! Plz say there is!

ooooo!! I've donated like 3000 once.. My sis and I were competing to see who could get the most! its fun as well. and its a gd cause! hahaha

Is this man crazy? Or evil?? Or is he just annoyed at how immature Susanah is? And I dont understand why she is so scared of a kiss. Perhaps you ...

Um sorry but the whole love thing is pretty fast! Its unreal. I mean, how can she just fall in love with someone and let someone do that to her ...

I dont get what really happened to her. Did she get raped or something?? Anyways can't wait to read the next one!! Plz post sooooooon!!!! Chayonz! oh and dont get ...

yay! again. Oh just one thing. I noticed that Darren seems to get a bit my opinion towards this part of the story. It shows that he isn't just a ...

yay!

Hey. I haven't been ctitiquing ur stories but I have been reading them! I really like them. They aren't like most of the cheesy vampire stories I have read before. ...

yay yay yay yay yay! OKKKK. I shall change it around. I thought this chapter was a bit off in the first place. Thanks for helping me with it. The ...

Hey. The story is reallly intruiging. Its completely different from anything I've ever read. Although the black glob reminds me of that black evil gooey crap from the movie Spiderman ...