chasingstars

I'm in the sun; no longer hidden, You give me what the others didn't. Tired and patient, here I'm sittin', Waiting on your call. you give me what others didn't ...

I frantically look around My heart skips a beat My throat swells and i can't breathe.. We're are you? Don't do this to me right now! where are you? i ...

wow. you capture a dream moment for that poem.. romantic and reminds us of beautiful memories of the past.

nice and colorful.. i like the sylar one..

the presence of someone so dear is truly an inspiration for us to see the good in everything. i felt the longing from that poem.. nice work

missing someone what does that mean? is it the frustration or a deep devastation to see her smile and hear her laugh with her funny stories that never runs out ...

nice heart.. soaring high with its wings..

Small precious things put into words. Nice piece

I think you should sent it to your teacher. :)

I listen As does our gracious moon i might replace it with something like, "just like"

Let us play with one another, teach our souls to sweetly suffer sweetly suffer hmmn.. coax a love to swiftly grow then bury it in icy snow ironic pluck a ...

running water, flowing stream took the bad and create the good.. nice..

The noise the water makes when I move is to loud, too loud, I guess.. nice short poem.

Butterfly’s with colors should it be Butterflies? I walk toward the tree , like I have so many times before like I did?

Goodbye Ricky, was my last thought before the entirety of the other car completely crushed mine. I got confused, if I missed something, your were mentioned about Jason and Peter, ...