chasingstars

A true story put into a poem.. that's how it is to me.. the emotions you put into it made it a beautiful poem..

An imagination A Wonderful creation A sense of freedom It's divine intervention There will be conclusions These will give you motivation Are you standing still Watching life in motion Hearing ...

I never thought I'd be materialistic but all that's left of you is things . How many times have I looked down at your picture, needing the comfort that it ...

its a random piece of stuff a collection of words struggling to make sense creating a meaning finding... searching a world of unknown an interpretation of billions we call it ...

I like that your poem was full simple words. Most of the stanzas rhyme, except I guess for this. maybe the count of syllables I am superior when compared, Yet ...

i like your first stanza :)

I must commend you for your vivid imagination, you manage to make me imagine the scenes you were writing and feeling as if I was there. I just hope for ...

the poem is simple yet i find it nice the message is true but we seldom acknowledge. keep on writing and rhyming

very nice poem.. it could mean so many things to so many people.. as for me. i see it as if each of us could be the king in the ...

nice poem .. just confused with these lines I try to cry for just a moment, but the tears have already fallen." i wonder what was ur story behind the ...

great talent in poetry.. the subject feels dark though.. hope to read other poetry of yours with lighter subject :)

i kinda like the "whispers of forgotten things" , nostalgia is that what it is. I was guessing of what the poem was truly about, school scenario with moment of ...

nice poem

the poem makes me feel like its a true story you've been inspired to write about and it's really nice. I agree with the ending, well the old man could ...

very nice message and definitely true.. keep writing