chasingcolts21

Here's the review I owe you. Thanks for having me come here, I really liked this story. *Epic awesomeness* I'm sorry, but I have not read Pied Piper either, but ...

Thanks. I'll write the review now. :P

Good job, it was nice and simple. This is hard to review because there's not much to it. 1. Fix the smudge. GIMP or Photoshop can fix smudges with one ...

Great idea! Nice, it's kind of flashy. 1. Rate your work. This contains some rate it R. 2. Change the color font. With the white stars, the text is hard ...

Brilliant picture! The angle leaves the viewer wondering about your picture. Impressive. 1. Crop out the hair, as the others mentioned, it's very distracting. 2. I live in Wisconsin, and ...

Hello great picture! 1. I think Daybreak's (that's the woman's name, right?) face needs some touch-ups. 2. The neck is too wide and fat. It doesn't correspond with her body ...

This is my first- ever pantoum... I posted this in my NaPo thread too (I didn't cheat- I posted it there first!) If the punctuation is off, tell me when ...

Hello! I'm Colt, let me specifically go into detail about characters. Step 1: Learn Your Characters Learn everything about your characters. I mean everything . Even if you think you'll ...

Are we going to keep going with this or what? If we start over lets please do it soon. I agree. :D

Rhyme schemes are hard. but taking a word and rhyming is simple. :P You should submit this to Squills. Great article. :D

Nice greet, anti-pop, trying to scare her away? :D Anyways, I'm Colt, feel free to PM me if you need anything. :P What's your favorite genre to write? What is ...

Hello, I'm Colt. I joined just over a month ago, so you aren't the only new one. Welcome to YWS! Here we have some rules. :P 1) Rate your work. ...

Hello! I'm Colt! :arrow: Punctuation You do not need to have punctuation at the end of every line, it gets quite distracting. Like how bubblewrapped started to say, it only ...

Hello, I'm Colt. I love the picture! I wish I had skills like that. I would draw characters from my novels. It's style is unique, comical, and anime-ish. It's impressive. ...

Hello, I'm Colt. I just wandered randomly over here and thought that I should make one of these things. My specialties include: Science Fiction (all aspects) Fantasy (all aspects) Characters ...