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Re: The Outcasts
Jay walked through the forest, examining his blood-stained clothes for wounds. He found a few, but they weren't fatal. Instead of stopping he kept going, hoping to not run into ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Hi I'm new Here
Hello, I am Colt. I'm new here too, and I better start welcoming others if I want to be a Greeter soon. :P Rules: - Rate your work! - If ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: YWS Bill of Rights
Oh my gosh, this is brilliant! Very clever! *memorizes* This is as good as our real one. I don't see many errors either. This was amazing. And, there was repetition ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Hola. I'm new. :)
Technically, you can. However, you have to be good at both jobs, relatively active on the site, Have at least one month's membership. And then there's the matter of getting ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Born From Revenge
Hello! My name is Colt, and I'll be reviewing your story today. Now, I opened this because I seen that it what it was a fan fiction for. I love ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Valentine
Hello, I'm Colt, and I will be critiquing your poem this evening. This poem was superb, I loved it. It was connectable, and flowed well. Like Rory, I was left ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: e
Hello, I'm Ryan, or Colt, as most usually call me now. Overall, I liked the piece. There was a clever use of stylistic devices. Pros +Lots of stylistic devices (Yay!) ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Light
I'm Colt, and I'll be reviewing your picture today. Very interesting photo, a candle. Is this symbolic? For love for someone? You don't have to tell, just teasing. I think ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Without Reservations
Hello! Nice to meet you! My name is Ryan, or Colt as most know me as. Sadly, I have not read this book yet, so it'll be interesting to learn ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Lies
Hello, I'm Ryan, I will be reviewing your poem this evening. Everything has been picked apart. I'd advise though that you'd add punctuation. It helps the flow of reading, helping ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Hola. I'm new. :)
Maybe I find a way to be both instructor and greeter. -nods- I will be neutral.
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
Name: Jay Jensen Gender: Male Age: 16 Special ability: Telepathy (sometimes he can let others communicate back and forth with him) and absorption of memories, skills, and powers through skin ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: A question
I don't like Word 2007; it's too different. I just use the older, easier versions.
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Hola. I'm new. :)
Thanks for coming in and welcoming me everyone! This is really nice and amazing. I feel as though I've made a million friends in the few days I've been here. ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Hola. I'm new. :)
Oh my gosh, you guys like restated every rule on this site in here :o You could have post links, couldn't you?
Mar 6, 2009
