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Re: In The End.
Hello, my name is Colt. First of all, the format is totally wrong! I have never seen a poem written on one line like that before. It's called pressing the ...
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Re: And Then.
Hello, my name is Colt. Wow, that was grasping enough! I hope you make it into a novel, I'd love to read it. I'm sorry, but it needs a new ...
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Re: Any guys who like romance?
I've always considered myself a hopeless romantic, and it's always bugged me that there aren't many romance novels out there targeted towards men. A lot of the ones I've seen ...
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Re: The Safeway
Name: Leo Age: 17 Gender: Male Race(human or mutant): Mutant Appearance: He has short blond hair, and sparkling blue eyes. Leo is tall and skinny, a bit muscular. Place of ...
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Re: Apocalypse
this still open, and if it is, then may I know about the powers we are supposed to have?
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: The Safeway
*Do you need more characters?*
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Re: Watching the Night Sky
Hello, I'm Colt, or Ryan, call me whichever. I noticed a few things about your piece. 1. The moon seems out of place, it's just there. It bothers me. 2. ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Windy is Here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hello, Windy, I'm Ryan, or Colt, as you probably already know. If you need reviews, I'm there to PM. Or even help around here. I don't bite hard. Haha.
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Hola. I'm new. :)
Aren't you new yourself, Windy? You seem familar yourself...hm....
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
(um...how am I supposed to er...join?)
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Shady Debate
Hello, my name is Colt, and I'll be reviewing your work this evening. I must say, this is a creative, outside-the-box idea. I hope you build on to it. Yay ...
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Re: The Silent Reindeer
June. You need to post something new, so I can go grammar picky. Hehe. :P The title was amazing, it stuck out and I love it. I can see it ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Poem
Hello June! :) I am editing this because I told you I would :P Nice piece, it's really short and sweet. Title: Maybe something simple as Truth, Wisdom, or Words. ...
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Re: Oxytocin
Hello! Like Rory said, it was great to read a "smart" piece of writing. Nice little footnote. This is the first piece I have seen here with one. Bravo! I ...
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Re: The saving light
Hello, my name is Colt, and I shall be reviewing you this evening. This piece was interesting. The flow was mostly okay. A thing I like to call punctuation was ...
Mar 9, 2009
