chasingcolts21

Hello! I'm Colt, a newer member myself! Welcome to YWS! I see you are new, but we have a rule here saying you cannot post your work without reviewing two ...

Hello, I'm Colt, and I liked your poems, they are creative and spicy! I stand beside a mountain The stream beside me pure. The forests all around me Silent as ...

Oh thanks! You are welcome. Now I have more time on my hands, I'll see about more to my review. Our bloody sacrafice (sacrafice is spelled wrong, it should be ...

Wow....that was amazing for only ten minutes! I might go take a peek at your old work to compare. *nods* Good job though on trying to focus on something else, ...

*Okay thanks I supposed to "meet" you guys somewhere or something*

Wow, the first verse seems way too long to me! Try shortens it or breaking it into two verses instead. The first verse could use more punctuation. God was very ...

Hello, my name is Colt. I really liked this song. It reminded me of the Little Mermaid. Hehe. There was a lot of alliteration and repetition, good job on that. ...

Hello, I'm Colt... First thing I want to say is be careful with the beginning. I wouldn't dare phrase my opening line like yours, I don't like 'this is a....about...." ...

*Oh and, do we have a discussion thread?*

If you need another character, either gender, I'm here!

(Leo) Leo began running from a pack of dogs, knowing he couldn't take them all by himself. After a while, he knew he had no choice to attack them. They ...

Jay walked through the forest, examining his blood-stained clothes for wounds. He found a few, but they weren't fatal. Instead of stopping he kept going, hoping to not run into ...

This was an okay poem. Parts were good and others were...just there. But that's what we are for--to fix them! If you actually do end up getting this published, I ...

Hello, I'm Colt. 1. I have a knack for noticing formatting problems in work. Is there a reason the title is not centered, but the actual poem is? 2. TOO ...

Welcome to YWS, once again. I'm Colt. I'm kind of new too, so yay us! I don't know if it was meant, but the first verse kind of stands out ...