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Re: I'll Always Be Weak
Like mhmmcolleenx0 said, I don't really look in here, but since I was lurking about, I seen this and decided to read it. I'm glad I did. :P Very interesting; ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: I'm Ravin'
Wow...great job! I don't really care for Poe *don't kill me* but this was brilliant. It seems more like a story than a poem though. I also think some things ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Hot Air Balloon
Hello, my name is Colt. Welcome to YWS! I see you are new, so you probably don't know the rules yet. We have a strict rule stating that for every ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: tears
Hello, I'm Colt and I will be critiquing this piece today. Welcome to YWS! I hope you have had a grand time so far! How do you like it? If ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Old version of Outcasts
I think our characters should vote for a leader or something. -_-
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
storm
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
As the three of them slowly made their way towards the hideout, he had that feeling you get when you absolutely know that something bad is bound to happen. Jay ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Praise the Goddess
Hello! I'm Colt :P Welcome to YWS! It's nice to meet you. If you need help around here, feel free to private message (PM) me. I see you are new ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Silent Night.
Hello. :D Now, starting with the title. Be careful, there's also a song with the same name. The stanzas are kind of unbalanced, I'd make each the same amount of ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Old version of Outcasts
And Robin, Jay, and Evan, I guess, we'll make our way to the hideout now.
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
*hope this is okay me posting another character I'm not gonna really play him but I thought a bad Outcast might be nice* Name: unknown is labeled as priority one ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Anyone have a twitter account?
What is Twitter? I have heard about it all the time, but never actually joined it.
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: The Outcasts
Jay sighed, relieved to finally see another one of his kind. He said, "Well...I've been here and there...you know, the usual, being chased, nearly dieing, getting ambushed. I'm fine, though. ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Old version of Outcasts
Yay! We finally have one! *dances like a weirdo* Now...time to be serious. We need to all meet up and stuff. Robin, Evan, and Jay are know together, and likely ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Antique Rain
Hello, my name is Colt. Overall, I was awed. The description was lively and amazing. It was better than the title made it out to be. I would change the ...
Mar 12, 2009
