chasingcolts21

Hello! I'm Colt! This was a nice, short, sweet poem. There are two ways you could go to improving it. The first way is changing a few words and keeping ...

(Why drop out? We're going to need as many characters as we can, especially males seeing as most are females)

Hello! Interesting choice for a fanfic...Halo! Like lukas8u said, tone it down please. Not much really is that dramatic. Not much grammar errors, and lots of repetition. Also, the paragraphs ...

Wow! Hello! I'm Colt. Your poem was tragically great! I don't know if it is free verse or not, but the format is weird and distracting. There was alliteration and ...

Hello Anna! I'm Colt! Obviously I will review your poem. I love the strong use of stylistic devices, but there could be more metaphors, similes, and personification. A simile is ...

I'd have to say Al Gore's book, An Inconvenient Truth: The Planetary Emergency of Global Warming and What We Can Do About IT. Long, boring, and hundreds of pages of ...

Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card was really amazing. It was on our Battle of the Books list this year, so I read the series. I have read Ender's Game ...

The Spellman Files. The best book on the Battle of the Books list this year.

Oh my gosh! I love the series so far! I cannot wait for the fifth! So soon, but so far away. I'm excited for it. :P

*would you like someone to temporarily take care of Robin?*

Oh my gosh :o I loved it! It was great! It flowed tremendously well, and it rhymed! [s]Poems here lost their rhyming[/s] No poems here anymore do not rhyme much ...

Hello, I'm Colt, and I must say, sweet poem! Welcome to YWS! As I said in your other thread, members must keep a two review to one critique ratio. I ...

Oh no, I understood it, I just don't think the title just fits right. Maybe it's just me. I'm a bit weird like that. :P It's probably because it wasn't ...

Same here, MidnightVampire, so it's not just you. My computer won't let me see your picture either. I'm sure it's brilliant too, most photos here are. Also, should the title ...

is amazing! I agree with MeadowLark, it looks way too much like a puppy. Unless it's really a puppy in disguise as a bunny? Haha. His tail looks a little ...