chasingcolts21

I have a Facebook too, and I've already gotten a few YWSers on it. :P

An amazing piece! Great job, there wasn't much wrong with it! You captured my interest at the beginning of the poem. I'd add a simile, or even a Homeric simile. ...

Hello! I'm Colt, I'd also like to review the finished work too. You did rate your work! I'm happy and proud on that. Looking all around, I'd say 90% of ...

Hello! I'm Colt, and I'd love to help you. I see you are a new member, yay! Um...you can PM (private message) me if you need any help. We have ...

*I thought I had read somewhere one sentenced posts weren't allowed here. I thought we should start over, that way we aren't lost.*

Hello! I agree with ChildofEden, it's way too big and blurry. Hard to make out. Nice angles and pose, it's great! Good job! I love the name too! Haha! -Colt

Well a satyr tends to be good, but you could use Scylla or Charybdis. Maybe a Cyclops? Perhaps minotaur? Hydra? If you need on them, PM me. I agree; a ...

Okay I think we should start eliminating the ability to post a single sentence. They are to short. *Isn't it like against the rules somewhere...? And I'm waiting until someone ...

Hello, I'm Colt. Nice little poem you have there. Pros: +Good format, each stanza is the same amount of lines. +Great use of alliteration and repetition. +It's short and sweet, ...

Hello June! -don'tletthemonkeeskillmeI'mreviewingthis- When you told me you had another part of this, I was so excited to read it! I nearly died when I seen that you posted it. ...

Hello June! Nice pictures! :P I loved them all, thumbs up! :D 1. KITTY! RAWR! Haha. I like his tongue sticking out. Kawaii looks a lot like one of my ...

Hello June! Yes I found your work with my secret powers I am hiding from you. Haha. I love the "I feel important" part. Very relatable! Thanks you two, for ...

Hello everyone! Unless you really need me, I think I will be dropping out. I'm lost and confused here, and I doubt any of you would take the time and ...

The guilt of me knowing her secret gnawed at me like a rat. The guilt of me knowing her secret gnawed at me like a bird to a worm. The ...

I have a Facebook too! Yay us! Facebook is okay, but I also dislike the new version.