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Re: Happy Birthday!
Thats absolutely adorable, hahaha and I love the out there humor of the whole piece because its one of the ones that make me happy not just like a standard ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: heres another poem cheers
This peom is a bit about drugs. We ate'em up and snorted the others More casual than bread and butter You could find it a bit of a bother Im ...
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Re: Me myself and i
Hello, my name is James im 14 and are in 9th grade. Theres alot of crazy things about me that were going to be able to get into that make ...
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Re: War Poem
The old man remembers The times of his fathers When he was a marine He thinks to himself quite frankly Of the tanks and war machines How they killed all ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Vampire Empire
“Chill the fuck out” says Ellina ridiculously “You almost hit me.” I just pulled this line out. You need a comma after out and also you need a comma after ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Reasons for writing
I write because i enjoy it and most people enjoy stuff that there good at. So naturally if your winning at something you'll enjoy it more for example if your ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Fight the Night
I really like that short simple sweet straight to the point and quite meaning full Brealdown =]: Face the night death is fun time to fight no time to run ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Only who can prevent forest fires?
I thought about it and i accidently pressed me I was going to go with Pat Buchanan to still be wrong. Horribly wrong, but at least i would avoid some ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: A couple more of my poems.
Great poems espacially the second one. It was funny but I didn't fined any cursing in your poem. Good Job! Thank you very much thats just the kind of feeling ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: My name is James
Hello, my name is James im 14 and are in 9th grade. I've been here for about 15 hours now and i have alot of poems down already check them ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: A couple more of my poems.
Ummm.....I think you made a mistake. You aren't suppose to use cursing language unless it's in the post not the comment....you might want to edit that:D I can't follow what ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Another Love Poem
This is a very gorgeous poem. I like the way you rhymed than stopped rhyming but the beat and flow still kept' the same. I like this poem I hope ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: A couple more of my poems.
P.S. That random bored one could be classified as stupid by some, but who says that's bad? I like it! This where i stood on my poem I looked at ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: The Edge Chronicles
I started to read one of these one time when i was probably in 4th grade. And i lost the book and could not think of what the series was ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: A couple more of my poems.
This first poem has no name making it unintitled[humor ha ha]. But in all seriousness it's about love you'll see what I mean in a few seconds when you see ...
Nov 8, 2008
