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Hi Again! Thanks for all the welcomes! This site is slowly becoming an obsession which could be be very good or very bad! At this current moment I am reading ...

So here is a revision. Please keep in mind that I want to keep this short because it will be a prologue. Also, I need help with the last paragraph!! ...

Ok. All I can say is "WOW". Really, extremely interesting... weather you have an amazing talent to create such a vivid picture of your characters emotions or you just worked ...

Hi Kakali, first off thanks for PM'ing me! I was totally excited to read your first chapter! Ok, so lets get down to it. and a young lad In thinking ...

Loved the improvement on the ending! I think you really took her back to her self misery instead of leading her away from that emotion which is great for me ...

This is just a short paragraph about a general idea I have for a novel. Other than horrible grammatical errors let me know if it even seems some what interesting ...

As a reader it was a bit hard for me to really connect with anything or anyone. Obviously you are creating a totally different reality than "us humans" are used ...

A major improvement from the first version! One thing I noticed as a reader was near the end; Claire wondered what they were like. How many of them lived there? ...

Hi, and Welcome to ME! I am looking forward to meeting everyone and of course looking forward to any future criticism received by all. A small bit of information about ...