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Re: Wait 'til Time Sparks
oh my. that is. So....saddening. This piece is so passionate, in a subdued way, it's not fiery, more like candle light. I love all the metaphors you use, and I ...
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Re: Younger Vs Elder
I'm sorry.....moving picture distracting me.....but I'm pretty sure this piece is better than the moving picture...pretty sure.... Anyway, this is a really nice piece!This story is well developed, but
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Re: Frosty
This poem makes me......pensive. Not sad, but more thoughtful, reflective, I guess. You really get a full story from this poem, I can tell it was well thought out.This diction ...
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Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
bones
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Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
butterfly! :D
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Unfortunately, the velciraptor was located in an area full of hungry monsters and he couldn't run because the T-rex had eaten one of his legs.
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
wow! how did you know? :D TUBM is staring at their computer! xD
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Re: Rename The User Above You
Santakitty
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Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for your avatar being too adorable!
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Re: Suicidal Sorrow
this poem is...different. It's free verse and straight-forward, but that fits very well for this subject matter. I like the personification in these lines: I can hear it breathing, I ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: What is the first word you think of when I say...........
...cheese...
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Re: The Concept of Fears
Haha, I don't quite get it! XD But I still feel laughter which makes it special! Humorous in a strange way....a lighthearted tone given to a solemn matter, fear, definitely ...
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Re: Charcoal Sketch
O la la! Very enticing poem!This poem exudes seductiveness!I can just picture it! This poem is very vivid, exuberant in its descriptions, without revealing too much. I don't know how ...
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Re: Not My Turn
oh, this is good! I can feel the anger bubbling just beneath the surface!This poem really portrays the story of the complications of friendship when one friend doesn't know the ...
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Re: Crimson Tears
I feel....sorrow. I love the metaphor you use with the flower and crimson tears, and the word wither just really makes the piece so much more.....I don't know, but it ...
Dec 17, 2011