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WICKED. Love the irony of the title! It's just so dark and creepy! give me a twisting feeling in my gut! powerful stuff. Fantastic poem! ( I believe you mean ...

This piece makes me feel immensely happy for some reason! Just the feeling that comes from it. The imagery used is vivid. A dance themed title would probably suit it ...

Please don’t break my walls They protect me from the outside They keep me safe from all The terrible things that reside In the outside world like pain Who needs ...

Oink I’m a pig the way I live Is not looked upon as clean, even for a barn But hey, what can I say That’s just our way and it ...

I like the poem, and although I am slightly confused I understand the meaning pretty well. The way you write is blunt and sort of choppy, but I think it ...

I don't know you. The poem may be too personal, depending on what you consider too personal. I like the poem. The feelings in just grab you and take you ...

Oh dear, I hope you find your mind! But even without it you have written a fantastic poem! I find the topic of this poem extremely interesting and the way ...

The story is moving, but it seems kind of rushed to me. Maybe add more details or something, to help transition from place to place. The best tittle I can ...

I like the rhyme and the flow, and how it tells a story. The problem is, I'm not sure what the story is. So unless confusion is the emotion you ...

I like the creativity of the metaphors! I haven't seen something like this before! Certainly unique! I also like how it's straight forward, not meandering, better to get the point ...

Whoa. Great poem. It makes me sad, but I can envision it in my head and I can feel the emotions going through it. It also has some deep points ...

It gave me chills! And now I feel the urge to look over my shoulder! It's creepy in the most fantastic way ever! If you keep writing like this I ...

I love this story. It's just so real, and I love how you got all of this complex stuff to fit in a short story!I think it's incredible!

That's a great poem! The way it tells a story is fantastic and it flows very well. I didn't see any spelling errors, but I'm not the best at spelling. ...