cathy

I love this poem! I especially like the first and second verse's! Well Done!

I think it is a really good poem, but if you put capital letters at the beginning of each line and capital letters for "I". Also I don't think you ...

Thank you. I have changed a few things, but I'm not sure what to use instead of "I". Also, I was wandering if I should try to expand the story ...

I looked up at my mother. Her sad lonely expression burnt into me and her long sullen face hadn't shown an ounce of contentment for weeks, and her communication skills ...

Yeah, I think they are all right. Did you search on the Internet for Latin? I do Latin at school, but i searched on the Internet "Latin Dictionary" and the ...

I like it, but i don't really understand the last verse. [/quote]But these nights I lock my doors for now I know you're kind all to well. Before you my ...

To be honest with you, i did have, but at the time when i was writing, i was in a sleeping bag in the middle of the night camping in ...

i have written music to go with it, so i have to use slang so it goes with the music

I can't do this any longer, Can't be this any longer, Can't see you any longer. You just sit there looking at me So pretty and so happy, What do ...

I see in your heart, the dreams that you wanna achieve Open the doors let me into your blood stream, And let me flow 'round you baby, we all need ...

The feeling's I'm describing, they're messing up my mind, The words that flutter in my brain just hate to leave, goodbye, The hole inside my head it is just growing ...

cool! I can't wait for chapter 3!

Because they don't know how each other feel, and are both inconvenient. I wrote three short poems about the same thing, and I hope this one is my best. I ...

He was here, She was there, Sitting together In a chair. Not speaking, Or looking. But acknowledging both, The two of them could be so close. All the eyes were ...

hey, im cathy. Wat else can i say?!