catchingwave

First off, this is a pretty good story. I really like how you put so much effort into describing it and the plot was also pretty interesting. For a first ...

Great story! I'll just do a quick review since I think that most of what I would've liked to have said was already mentioned in Lauren2010's review. I suppose there ...

Wow! Pretty violent! And also pretty good. :smt001 I agree with Benrobertringrose on his opinion of your story. It was really interesting and kept me captivated the whole time. I ...

Hi! Your story was awesome! :D I completely agree with alfredsymon and munchkin on everything they said. I simply couldn't pull my eyes away from the screen once I started ...

Omg this is REALLY good!!! I admire almost everything about it!!! The beginning is really catchy and the ending is absolutely amazing ! Great job on this magnificent piece! :D ...

Honestly, I really liked this. It was pretty good for something written in eight minutes but I do believe that it could do with a little improvement. I must also ...

Hey! First thing is...great job!! :D This is really good! I absolutely adore your use of description and how you've added detail into this piece. I must also completely agree ...

OMG! This-was- INCREDIBLE !!! I can't believe no one has reviewed it yet!!! It's, by far, the BEST piece I've come across for a while. I can't believe how amazing ...

Omg this is so crazy! In a way, I like that. It's so random and weird and strange and a whole list of other words that won't come to mind ...

This is great! The flow of this piece is so smooth and easy to follow. I love everything about it! :D Good job, except I think the only one flaw ...

Um, I think it's too late for me to provie feedback for you now (since you probably already handed this story in) but I just wanted to comment on it ...

Wow! This is AMAZING! :D I didn't really pick up any major errors and the mood created from this piece of writing is so amazing! It kept me captivated all ...

Hi, this was a good poem, it just had a little too much repetition and could've been more creative but otherwise, it was really well done. In the poem you ...

Great poem! :D I agree with Stargirl101 on her review, but I'll add a few points of my own. The first stanza, I must admit, is a little confusing. The ...

Hey! This was incredible! It's so short yet so effective. I entirely agree with MeganKat on her review, but just wanted to add a few things myself. First of all, ...