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Thank you for critting all my work. =^-^= Especially about the prophecy, I was hoping people would like it! Anyways, *ahem* the punishment was uhh meant to be odd and ...

[Dierik] Dierik rolled his eyes, though no one could see him down here, "I didn't really think we'd need one." It was silent for a moment, no one had brought ...

As promised :wink: Chapter 1: A feeling of Despair “This is an emergency broadcast bulletin!” The automated system yelped as the speaker was whipped away by the two hundred plus ...

i think for the sake of us getting somewhere, it eventually will lead to Toribrio's cabin

I promised, so here I am! I may not be able to get to the others today, sorry. I have a busy schedule (for once). I will crit them all ...

Chapter 3- Prophecy and Punishment A solitary cloud began drifting towards the moon. As it entered the path of light, darkening the clearing, the cats below began to panic. Like ...

Interesting, slightly cliche' but hey humans overall are cliche' aren't they? Oh, and the title? I think you mean 'Meaningless Words'. I told you that I loved you And you ...

This was impressive! The first stanza really captures the reader's attention, and I think gossamer worked fine actually. The thing that bothered me is that in the first stanza, the ...

**personally, im confused. Where and when is it set?**

what happened? why is no one posting anymore? if we need a plot, we should keep it going here with ideas and stuff. come on! let's make this storybook last!

**i hope this makes sense, i'm a little confused** [Bourne] Bourne had been hiding in the shadows, he knew because of the damp air, listening to the group of people ...

[Dierik] Dierik nodded, "I agree, let's see where it goes." Some of the crew looked nervous as they stepped into the stale, damp darkness. Dierik could hear his heart pounding, ...

**i had to go somewhere and couldn't post for a while, what happened?**

maybe we can find some sort of tunnel ooh!! dierik could get mad that they are stuck and then push garin into the wall which caves in and wa-la le ...

Chapter 2- Challenge Sunpaw’s eyes widened as the BurnClan cats approached Red Bluff. The cliff-like rock formation was arranged in a crescent half-circle, facing them. The rocks were dusty red, ...