cat4prowl

okay first of all let me say that was fantastic. i loved it! i think it is a great way to start a story. the imagery was great and the ...

heeelllooooo!!!! welcome to the site, im pretty new too but its been great! now im off to go read and maybe critique your written works *gives evil laugh* later!

that was fantastic. i loved it, its got great character and potential. i understood the part of your story with Kathira's woods so dont worry, your visuals were pretty good ...

oh the dialogue is italisized because she is thinking it. you know, like slowly taking the world in. ill work on the stiffness of the dialogue thanks!

come on people! please review!

well Azila critiqued my prologue so i fixed some errors and now the whole chapter is up for grabs. to be honest, I'm very nervous about posting some of my ...

this is just the beginning of chapter 1 of one of my stories. It is not the whole chapter i repeat, not the whole chapter. just the beginning part. please ...

welcome! im new too but dont worry about having a long post or sounding nervous. this is a writing site, you are supposed to rant on and on about whatever ...

okay so i posted this here to make friends and get to know people. *gives you the evil eye and then winks* so hi! im here and i want to ...

umm... one thing to say. keep writing! (while i hunt down the first 2 chapters) i like it; very suspenseful, good details, nice dialogue. Fantastic! the only thing i can ...

Hey im cat4prowl, most people end up calling me cat. ;) im new here, so feel free to let me know what im supposed to do (i have a pretty ...

thanx you guys i know i can be a little... easy to discourage sometimes but don't worry you can't get rid of me that easy! :)

thanx so much for the critique i will work on it ;)

hey im new here i posted a couple of things but one of my critiques discouraged me a little bit so im laying off for a while. (i know, poor ...

this is just a poem i had to write for school and decided to post here PLEASE REVIEW i am new here and want to see what it's like thank ...