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thanx bigbad! i guess we are now each other's #1 fans! i look forward to reading more MD and i will post more DN soon! thanx again!

ha i like the way youre alll oh no im gonna die and then hey buddy whats up good job i still think you could go into a little more ...

da da da Dun! well, what happens next?! well anyways this is a critique so i will proceed to point out your errors so you dont have to do it ...

i like this one! the only thing i have to say is that some of the rhymes sounded choppy maybe you could find a way to make it run smoother? ...

oh and sallow is a word that means kind of caved in and gaunt

thanx! i was so worried it wouldnt keep the readers attention! :lol:

well its a little cliche but thats not necessarily as bad a thing as everyone makes it out to be. well here goes: (my writing is in bold) Prologue The ...

i have edited this according to the suggestions so far ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- well heres the second chapter, keep in mind it is not near as

oh and bigbad i will explain the whole unsurprised thing in the next chapter because it turns out that our mc is wondering that too. ;)

you guys left awesome critiques, better than i've ever recieved before and i loved it! thank you so much. i also liked how you looked at the piece with such ...

this is fantastic! the letter from lacy was perfectly worded, perfectly executed. the first kill, which i think was an important turning point in the story, was also perfect, it ...

ok thanx i fixed the spelling thing. i can understand what you mean about the dream thing but it's kind of supposed to be that way. thanx again for the ...

I used the first paragraph of one of my other stories, so if it seems familiar thats why. Please review, i know its long. *** Chapter 1 All was silent. ...

:shock: wow... that was awesome! i cant wait until the next one! one question... WHY can't females 'blood' not sustain werewolf blood? Humans all have the same blood, i thought ...

great! the only thing i noticed was one of the first sentences : I was freaked out to the bone. which didnt really make sense. also, the conversation with Lacy ...