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thanx for the crits everyone! im not much of a poet, i know. i always focus too much on the rhymes :P i may work on this later, but I'm ...

(EDIT) I have abolished the deadline rule, feel free to join us at any time Yes, I am aware that someone else has already done this RPG but I thought ...

i wrote it a couple seconds ago and gave it a short revise but it still might be kind of... rough. just thought i'd give it a try. some rhymes ...

it took me forevor to find this post but i found it and now... yeeeaaah!!!! another great chapter bigbad! very nice! the romantic twist was interesting but i think you ...

ha ha thanx bigbad! i saw the werewolf thing and hit myself on the head. smart me :D thanx for the reply you rock! :smt035 or should i say you ...

here's the third chapter! still long, but read it and tell me what you think! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3 Eventually, night cast its

very nice bigbad! another fantastic chapter this time with lots of suspense! i like the arguements between Landon and his voice (although im not sure when the voice came into ...

interesting and intriguing but as bigbad said, it did sound a lot like twilight. which can immediately shake readers off.

well i was describing him to be that way, kind of unhealthy looking so im sticking with sallow. thx for looking it up though. don't worry, the 3rd chapter is ...

hooooly crap. that was the most awesomest thing i have ever read. thanks alot bigbad how am i supposed to wait for the next part after that?! i mean... its ...

thanx! i think i will follow canislupis' suggestion and take out the bolds. next chapter coming soon!

wow very good! impressive bigbad *wiggles eyebrow* well since this a crit: here i go: *Author's note* Italics are like an echo, repeating the last few words of the last ...

ok i decided to put in my edited version of this chapter. here it is: Chapter 1 All was silent. Not the nice silence that makes you feel calm and ...

thanx so much Azila!

wow i loved this chapter! i think it perfectly illustrated the self conflict that is sure to become a big part in this story. i like the way you have ...