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[Raiden] Raiden's eyes were bugging out of his head, he felt terribly intrusive and awkward. Stumbling backwards, he shot Korr an encouraging smile and sprinted towards the forest to give ...

i would like to more formally apologize for my overly harsh review. Your story is wonderful, i must have been in a pretty bad mood and i am [b]very/b] sorry. ...

[Blade] Blade pursed her lips, worried and confused. She dipped one wing and circled around yet again to make sure no one was dropping from the sky. Luckily, no one ...

umm im rather confused but ill try to point out some things my comments are bolded Tom looked at himself in the mirror. He looked the same as he did ...

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[Raitt] "Uh... I don't know?" Raitt replied, swishing his tail. He was almost scared to spend more time with Tama. Why? Because he enjoyed it too much. If he wasn't ...

[Blade] Blade sat down, frustrated now, "So there's no way we can be sure? We just have to believe blindly?" ZT shrugged, "For now." Blade scowled, feeling helpless. She absolutely ...

[Lathe] "For now," Lathe whispered. She glared, "What?" "You'll see," his grin widened, "But we'll have to save that for another time, or we'll be late." "Fine." **srry its short**

[Chase] A sudden lurch of the boat sent Chase sprawling backwards, then sideways against the railing. She ignored the throbbing in her head and grabbed hold of the railing again, ...

[Blade] Blade watched Stella go, a little confused... but subdued. She trusted Stella and she found it easy to believe that Reed was trustworthy, but where was the proof? Where ...

[Raiden] "What are you...?!" Raiden shouted as Korr jumped right off after her. Sighing, he walked to the cliff's edge, saw where they had landed, and propelled himself into space. ...

-dropping out sorry, too many storyobooks-

This was intriguingly interesting, and spine-chillingly realistic... Congratulations! haha there were a few minor mistakes i spotted: There couldn’t an arm! just add the be, obviously and some other

[Lathe] "Not even close," Lathe replied, his grin spreading as he blocked her sword again. He jabbed at her stomach and then slashed at her face, she ducked and then ...

[Lathe] Lathe grinned, unsheathing one of his swords, "Yeah, I really would." They circled confidently, each wearing a smirk, waiting for the other to make their first move. *i guess ...