casstic

"We face "why are you so upset? I'm not this upset," as though *his*nieces and nephews have more of a right to be sad than we do." (I added the ...

Thank you both for the lack of critique. =) This was written mostly from personal experience - my father was diagnosed with leukemia when I was eight years old and ...

Thanks for the warm welcomes. At the moment, there's a link to my DeviantART on my profile, if you want to see any. My avatar is from Tool's album, Lateralus.

To use a favorite phrase of English teachers and Grammar Nazis; "Show, don't tell." Choppy, not very descriptive, and nothing much is actually happening. Dialog can be key, but you ...

The sickness is taking over. Two weeks ago, your skin started lightening. Sitting with you, holding your hand, we watched it fade from tan and healthy to sickly yellow to ...

Full caps is unlikely to be a problem for me... My bad habits are going to be minimal caps and tiny bits of chatspeak. =) But that's generally a social ...

Suzanna smoothed her long blonde hair back into its proper position and stared into her own dark hazel eyes. But yet she hated being so pretty. All of the county's ...

A lot of shaky sentence structure, several grammar/punctuation errors, and several places where it's just plain choppy. I think most of it has been pointed out. You don't get a ...

Somebody give me the lowdown on the good and bad/basic rules i should know about this place? I've previously used deviantart.com, xanga.com, and a few networking/game sites such as gaia.com, ...