cassie17

I liked this poem because it sounds really natural and free. But, like the person above me, I had a hard time interpreting this poem. It kinda seems like you ...

This was pretty good, in my opinion. I don't mind the capitalization (or lack there-of). I feel that choosing whether or not to capitalize can really kind of "set the ...

Okay, I really really like the idea behind this poem (duh moment?) but the rhyming seemed very forced. The whole thing was kind of halting when I was reading, and ...

This was really good. The rhythm and flow was pretty good throughout most of the piece. But the last three lines seemed kind of out of place. The rest of ...