cassidyrose

Okay, just a few short things to say... this was a good start for a story. I love how you ended with the "how should i terrify him", as it ...

ONE THING TO SAY... F.U.N.N.Y... and cute, adorable, made my day... yadayadayada (okay, that was 4 things but oh well) :D ;D

Okay. This was FANTASTIC!!! Ignore what everybody else says about it, it is like, WOW. I am doing a story about super rich well dressed girls, and this is like ...

For a ten minute write, this was pretty good. Everything rymed, and it followed along greatly. It tells what is really true, and I like that! CassidyRose

Okay. This poem sounds like it is a mixture of fights with friends and boyfriends... so here goes my re-write... "You called me names, teased me about guys blackmailed, so ...

Ok, seeing as I wrote a different version of your other poem, I guess I'll do that with all of your poems... so here I go. "Confusing confusing confusing Colors ...

I agree... this is in the wrong catagory, it should be in short stories. I have to admit that I was kind of confused with this, it does not make ...

You might as well be saying... "oh Matt, I love you, oh Matt, can you see me? I watch and stalk you every day, and pray you see me... Do ...

2 My parents hadn’t returned home when I got home. I hurriedly stuffed my guitar underneath my bed, put a cardigan on over my ‘slutty’ tank top and grabbed my ...

Okay. I really liked this. I enjoyed reading this chapter, as it has a good plot. A few nitpicks though... This chapter was a little short for my liking, so ...

Love Story Chapter 5: The First Day of School I am going to seperate the point of views on the first day of school in different parts of chapter 5. ...

I love this poem! Of course... it is reveiw sunday so go reveiw others! Anyway, this was a good poem, and I love it. I might have to use it ...

This part was good. I loved how you incorporate everything. I do have one nitpick though. Even though it doesn't show it, you have some spelling errors. You might want ...

OK, WOW. This was a very good story, and leaves you wanting more. Like everyone else said, CLIFFHANGER!!!!! I also hate cliffhangers, especially when they are on short stories. You ...

This was a good poem. I enjoined reading it, and the fact of what it was at the end was a surprise. I can definitely relate to this poem, and ...