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  • Romantic Novels Re: chapter four

    He walked back to his car, and drove away. The night was silent after that, and as I sat down on the stairs that lead up to our house, I ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Craig's Fables - Part One

    This was terrific!!

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Catch a Shooting star

    The only thing wrong with this was the part of the song that you wrote. You put Catch a shooting star It is really catch a falling star. Other then ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Can't Let You Go

    Loved this so much that I have decided to follow you! It was awesome, so keep writing! CassidyRose

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Story chapter 4: The Holding Room

    In reply to what you said about the mild language and stuff, I don't think anyone really cares. besides. the launguage makes the whole story sound older, and better, like ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Story chapter 4: The Holding Room

    I can't believe that I have posted four chapters of Love Story! Oh and there is some mild language and blood and stuff but please enjoy and don't forget to ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic

    I love the hunger games, so I loved this! Keep up the good work and Maybe make more mini stories! cassidyRose

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Story chapter 3: Suspicions

    So this is the third chapter, please read the first and second chapters to understand more. Please enjoy and don't forget to comment! And here is the link for the ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Story chapter 2: Dancing in the Dark

    Love Story part 2! Please read the 1st chapter, to understand a little more. Please enjoy. And here is the link to the club-----> -Amber's POV- I stood in my ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Simple Love Note

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! I am CassidyRose, and I shall be your reviewer today! First off, for a beginner, this was very good. I remember first coming to YWS and ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Star

    This was a good poem, and I like that it rhymes. Watch your grammar, and don't rhyme to much, but use better adjectives. Other then that, keep up the good ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Boy and His Violin

    Once again, I am reviewing this poem, but only to write random stuff on it. So anyway... I love how you are telling me and all of our friends how ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Voice In My Head

    Okay, this was a good poem. I am not going to say much, because I don't have much to say. I am going to say, though, that I suggested this ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: May

    Okay, so this was very good... I was kind of confused but I guess that is just how the story goes. I am going to take a guess and make ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Love Story chapter 1: Just the Begining

    Chapter one is the start of a great story. it has a good plot, that has a good idea. One nitpick though... watch your grammar and spelling. I noticed a ...

    Jan 30, 2011


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