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Re: 5 Tips For Fantastic Characters
cool. you are so wise. thanks. this helped me a lot.
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: ♥ Art Boy
i love your story! i love the way you describe the boy! i bet he is really hot. i wish this happens to me or something!
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: Its Last Moments
This poem is lovely. It reminds me of my dog that died. I like it. Has great impact on the reader.
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Our Lost Autumn
Your poem has great impact on the reader. Which is nice. I actually think that your poem is beautiful and very organized and easy to understand. :)
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Just Close you eyes
It's nice. I picture hope in you poem. I like it.
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: I'm not seducing you but...
It's abstract but in a way graphic. I could definitely see the pictures in my mind, But it's nice, 'coz you express your feelings through this.
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Stars
Nice poem, dude! But it might be a little too scattered. There are lines that are supposed to be in here not there. If you know what I mean. But ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: "You got the top pulled down baby..."
I like your poem. Very uhmm narrative maybe? But I think it doesn't belong in the lyric poem. It's more of a narrative poem or maybe the one labeled 'other ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Broken Glass
It's kinda creepy and uhhm emo-ish but you did a nice job in expressing your feelings! keep up the good work! :)
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Hurt
nice poem. very informative. i bet this is from experience. or not. in anyway i like it. i really do. :)
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten (my first poem posted here)
Forgotten Have you ever been ignored? Of course everyone knows how it goes It's like a bullet shot through you How painful it is, nobody knows. You're a waste of ...
Feb 12, 2008 -
Re: One Night fixed up
awww. nice story. cry-worthy. i think the ending is sweet and angsty at the same time.
Feb 8, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
hi! i'm new here in young writers society. you can call me casey_kent coz i hate my name. and my friend introduced me this site. she's the only true friend ...
Feb 7, 2008
