casey_kent

I would get my swimsuit and have the best tan ever! -------------------------------------- What would you do if you found out that your boyfriend just dumped you for another guy?

Hello, my name is Jen and my dad's an ass.

Once in a far, far, far, faaaaaaaaaaar awaaaaaaaay land there lived a cute, annoying, humble, stupid, meek little girl. She lived with her really, really, really fat mother and her ...

Can't you save a little amount of money for the computer every time you get your salary?

....had little white spots on it. That's why he...

I loved it. I love the way you used figurative language in it. Although I found some errors that need some fixing.

Oh. I totally understand why your poem is like this. People, this is a concrete poem. Look it up if you don't know what I mean. But HelpSOS, I can't ...

I loved this poem. I totally agree with the message. I am the queen of crammer by the way. :D

I loved your poem. It has a really great message. I agree with it. Send this to the White House! lol. kidding. Good job, dear!

I loved it. This is a very good example of interesting poetry. lol. I loved the rhythm, rhyming and great imagery as mizz-iceberg said!

It's a very cute poem. I liked it. I almost fell in love with that guy. Who is he anyway? I wanna meet him!

It's funny. Definitely bestest of friends, dear! Keep it up!

I liked it. It was interesting and nice. Though it is kinda long that can make it boring. But nice job!

I loved this. I agree with aestar. You should send this to the White House. It's touching and very interesting.

I liked this piece. Although I didn't get the ending part. Uhm it's a little short. Maybe you can make this longer so that it would be very interesting!