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Hi. So basically I just read the little summary at the top and I'm not interested in reading the story. Why? Because Nanali is twelve and should be reading the ...

(The family in the piece below consists of devote Jews. Don't let the religious hints put you off though, they aren't too big) The eagle had grown deathly still and ...

Hey there, I liked this, but it seemed to personal to be expressed as "you" all the time. it seemed too general. I think it would be stronger written in ...

Hi there, So basically, I liked this. I'm not really a fantasy type of girl, but this wasn't bad. A couple of things, though: I want to know who Meave ...

Hi there, I hate to be a downer, but I really don't see the big deal. There wasn't much wrong with the poem itself, but I have to say, not ...

Hi there, Okay, so my big question is, why? Why does God give this kid a second chance? You don't explain that at all. I mean, sure you say that ...

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My dear Jon, you seem to have fallen prey to a trap that has caught so many wonderful writers: RHYME. It's addictive. Once you even begin to think about writing ...

Hey there, I started reading this but quickly lost interest. It was because of only two things: 1. I knew nothing about the main character, and therefore had no reason ...

A bit of my story.. i have a lot going at the moment... i started it a while ago and occasionaly i'll add bits. i know there'll be bits which ...

Hi there, Okay. Wow. I love this. The romantic tension is great all the way through. Clarissa is a bit flat, but Kyle has some personality and the dynamic between ...

Hey there, Why the French? It would make just as much sense in English, and more people would understand it. Although, once you take out the French parts, you're not ...

Hi there, I read this and it just didn't seem realistic enough. Have you ever seen the movie Sophie's Choice? It displays the camps and the psychological effects afterwards brilliantly, ...

Dearie, you're too good for this website. Aim for the stars.

Hi there! Okay, so there are a few things going on here. One is that I have no idea who narrator is. I mean, I'm guessing it's a guy because ...