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Re: You know you're a fencer when...lefties bug you?
I'm a huge fan in the fencing department! I'm also a lefty, so I guess I'm automatically an evel person, huh? Huh? Here's a little verse my stepmom taught me: ...
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: And This is the Crazy Part
You know what would make this really funny? A unicorn technician! If you can keep up the cliched style through the whole thing, I think it'll be great, but I ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Smoke and Dust
'I glanced at Bevan, wondering what he was thinking about. I was thinking about the city. As always I wondered what it held that could be so dangerous, so forbidden. ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Energy
Sometimes you just get that feeling That nothing can take you down, You know? The world is my canvas And I’ve got every single color Of paint ever invented And ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: The sight that Caroline see's.
I think it was great, but it would be a lot better in my opinion if we knew why Caroline's dad killed himself then, or at all. It might make ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Coppery-Haired Boy (early work)
This is an early piece of work I did, so it's kind of. . .blah, but here goes. The coppery-haired boy gazed up at the professor, his eyes alight with ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: HELP
How do I post my work? Please use small words, as I'm computer-deficient.
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: Acrostic
Sounds like something that should go either at the end or the beginning of something, but I would give up the idea of an acrostic. . .better to let it ...
Oct 22, 2006 -
Re: My first slash at writing V2.0
Wow! This is really good, but I think it could be better with a character in there to experience the fear and the excitement. Other than that, three thumbs up! ...
Oct 22, 2006
