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It's a great thought, so kudos on that front, but to be frank your lack of obvious rhythm was a little unappetizing. I don't mean to be rude, I just ...

Open your eyes. No wait, I take it back. Open your ears. Wind rushing, Dogs barking, People singing. And talking, always talking. Which is why it’s good To open your ...

Nice. I agree with piepiemann that the last line is really abrupt, and with fireweed that the message should be subtler. Also the second two lines, about the uniform, I ...

I'm not quite sure what you were attempting here, but you certainly achieved something. I really got a picture of a bored business man at a diner and the stuff ...

au revior

My unfinished novel Muse has a government where four magically gifted writers (LOL) control everything in that whatever they write comes true. The protagonist is a fifteen-year-old mercenary/thief who

In no particular order Otherland series by Tad williams Orson Scott Card's Ender and Bean series The Wizard of the Grove by Tanya Huff Myrren's Gift series by Fiona McIntosh ...

I definitely have some sort of writing disorder. A bunch of times I woke up in the middle of the night and I had to get up and write because ...

Hero---Somebody early on said !Xabbu from Tad William's Otherland, and I second that to the umteenth degree. Go !Xabbu! Also Alanna, from Tamora Pierce's Alanna series. And Valentine from Orson ...

Halloween

Well, I think that the Catholics are just plain wrong in that. My parents are gay and I've lived throug the tuanting. I've grown up to be a perfectly normal ...

You know how it gets when you sort of scan a poem without caring much? Most of the poem was that way (very very good, but nothing that kept me ...

Blue eyes, Hair like the crimson sun that sinks below the African horizon. Tears like opalescent ribbons trace his cheeks and he watches the autumn leaves tumble downward. Do not ...

6/10, because its okay but not hilarious. 8)

those are all tres beautifl pics!