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Hi there, First of all, I am so very sorry for the pain you are in; I can't imagine how that must hurt. Secondly, I want to say that as ...

Hi there, I couldn't help but notice that you're twelve. Seriously? That's awesome. For your age you are really very good. But I'm going to give you some tips, and ...

Hey there. I like the ideas, that you can't know what's going on inside someone else, that we are held back by our inherent qualities... but you know all that, ...

Hi there. Let's get started. So, I like the simplicity of it. It's a just a small-town cafe, a hot summer day and two kids, but somehow you've made a ...

Hi. This is good. A couple things, though. One, I had no idea that this was going on in World War 2 era. It could have been any time. Why ...

It went on, time did, and Eros became a man. He set one foot in front of the other and traveled the world, a smile creasing his face, a trail ...

Hey, so this was interesting. I like that he knew Freddy from Abnormal Psych and then it turned out he was in a psych hospital or something... But I had ...

Darkly, a solution: Run. Take nothing with you. Have yourself one of those all-American road trip, because soon you'll have... Responsibilities. So you burst out of there in a car ...

With you I want to walk the world With you; And hand in hand shall we traverse the world With footsteps made light by one another's joy And the moon ...

Imagine a little house on a quiet street in a quiet town. The house is comfortable like a thread-bare bathrobe, a fixture in a wildly changing world. Imagine a mother ...

Aw man, was this ever awesome! I truly loved it. I loved how you never really took time to explain Clara's situation, but by the end of the piece I ...

This is all I have of this story right now, and I take some time writing usually, but I plan to have more soon. Jan. 15, 2010 12:04 PM I ...

Hi Lyndzie, It's always nice to see new members on YWS, but please review at least 2 other members' pieces before posting any more of your own out of respect ...

Hi again. Much better. I'm glad to see you edited it! There are still some things to work on, though; some of the lines don't make any sense to me, ...

Hi there! Well, this was definitely provocative. I loved it. I could totally sympathize with the dude. He seemed flat, though. That was my main issue. He was at least ...