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The drumbeats pounded a strange, otherworldly rhythm as the playrs swooped in and faced eachother squarely. The old man wore a knowing smile, the young mn a cruel grimace and ...

Chocolate, once when my dad got a bonus at work. He bought it special for us, and we each got two of those little bars. Of course Dad's dead, and ...

5/10

Who wants their rank to be chunky monkey?!?! Hmm. Something to do with the Olympics. 2000 is a mighty big number.

This was beautifully done, the way you made the first stanzas with their technological words sound poetic and then wrapped it up with something as pure as the last two ...

It seems kind of like noise to me. I prefer oldies. Are you amused by trying to type on a keyboard with your nose?

Valkyries were Norse warrior women who were legendary for their strength and skill. It was said that if a great warrior dies in battle he would be taken by the ...

How often do you take a shower or bath?

Unfortunately, I was raised in a good home with a good family and my parents gave me this stupid, stupid habit of doing homework. Still, I have enough sense to ...

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no amount of money can buy me what I want: my parents' lives back. ---Misty Ba'rhiana how are your clothes different from the people around you?

This isn't supposed to be deep or stirring and I wasn't aiming for morbid, so I really hope you don't come out of this poem thinking that way. I really ...

The news does not concern me. ---Misty Ba'Rhiana Your character walks into his/her home and sees blood on the floor. What does he/she do?

The only issue I could find with this poem was that the "I fell in" line was very sudden and abrupt. Otherwise, kudos. :D

This was out of this world. I loved it. The only this was that the ending seemed sort of abrupt. I can't exactly think of a better way to wrap ...