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Maggie stopped at a rest stop fifty miles out of the city and pulled two hundred dollars out of her bank account, leaving only three hundred and thirty dollars remaining. ...

Chapter One Ellen Traum watched the woman walk into her office, carefully taking stock. She was in her mid- twenties, probably, and she wore baggy jeans and a man’s button-down ...

I will most definitely be writing NaNoWriMo '07. I'm so excited! I have this awesome idea and it's gonna be great. But uh. . .word count *shivers*

you can see a lot of charecture and personality in this picture

Umm, sorry to break it to you but there's nothing in this poem that we haven't all heard fifteen times already, in various forms. If you want to make this ...

Good. Short, but good. For me, the thing that wrecked the poem was the last line. It was casual, like tripping over your shoes as you leave the stage. It ...

Once in a while, on this website, a lucky critter comes across a poem that stands out above the terrible, the pretty good and even the very good. Palantalid, this ...

This sounds like one of those conversations you have in your head and wish you had the guts to say to the person, you know? It doesn't really sound like ...

This is really good. I love that someone is finally putting this idea into words, but nowadays its really hard to write a good love poem that's not cliche. i ...

This is very dry, but thorough. I'm sure you got an A on your essay, but I don't really see why you posted it. The sentences were simplistic, straight-forward and ...

That was so funny! It did look very unprofessional without capitalizations and punctuation, but it was hilarious! The mom didn't seem very real, alternating between joking about shooting her son ...

Hey Wesley I agree. This poem, while heartwarming, needs a specific instance to make it really good. The cliche is overwhelming and, to be honest, the poem is pretty boring. ...

Softly lullaby Sweet child sleeps like pearly dawn Memories will fade.

I love this, but, as always, there are issues. One of them is the principal of everything we poets hold dear: SHOW DON'T TELL. One example is the line that ...

I think you have an interesting take on it, the whole prison/only home thing. I actually love the idea of it, this murderer/kidnapper/arsonist feeling so sad about leaving the only ...