carden

July 20, 1943 Breakfast was the same bland porridge and milk. Though, Mrs. Johansson promised we would have brown sugar by the end of the week. Something to look forward ...

All of the chapter are relatively short, due to this being part of a novella. Thanks. --- --- --- July 14, 1943 I was sitting in the activity room, not ...

Hey, I'm Carden. So nitpicking. her body's week and her words untold I think you mean 'weak' instead of 'week'. She pray a wish, for a second chance The 'pray' ...

I was randomly inspired to write this. It is relatively rough. The lack of punctuation is on purpose. Thanks. ___ ___ ___ Death walked in the door And the bell ...

I had to read this book for a summer school course I took last year. I loved it. It was sad and abused foreshadowing but it just added to the ...

Review time! That was pretty awesome, I have to admit. I couldn't find anything wrong with it. :) Which is common with poems because it's all about the author's interpretation ...

1. Breaking Dawn. Specifically. 100 pages of honeymoon? No thank you. 2. Virgin and the Gypsy. Ughhghhghghghghghhghghghghg. 3. To Kill a Mocking Bird. I don't know why I don't like ...

Review time! Lucky for you I am picky when it comes to romance. Joy, joy! The narrative at the beginning is very Conradian (referring to Joseph Conrad and his ability ...

Review time. 8) Just one little issue I found: Soon, I was going to parish. In this line I think you meant 'perish', not 'parish'. Seeing as 'parish' means a ...

This is from a novel I am currently writing. Just wanted to see what people thought of this excerpt. Thanks. ___ ___ ___ Blood leaked out of the fresh gash ...

Well done. I enjoyed the simple rhyming scheme and the common words at the end of each stanza. For what it's worth, love is birth Nice. Using words that rhyme ...

First off, this was very entertaining and fun to read. Mostly because it was very realistic and easy to relate to. It seems like a stream of consciousness, which can ...

~What's your favourite book(s)? Trainspotting. It is amazing! ~Do you have a favourite author? Dorothy Parker is my hero. ~Do you like poetry? Meh. Depends on the topic. ~Cookies or ...

Thank you for the reviews. :) Thoughts are now italicized. Haha, yes, sacrificing the 911 was a hardcall. XD

Hey. Imma noob. :)