captaindomdude

An thouroughly interesting work! I really enjoyed the interaction between the two characters, and how mysterious everything was. Excellent job, I would like to see other adventures with these characte

Excellent work, felt the emotion in the piece perfectly. You portrayed what is a hard issue for anyone and showed a very mature way of dealing with it.

Once again, amazing work. You progressed the plot very well, and even your 'violence and gore' was perfectly suited to the storyline. Definately can't wait for more.

I really liked the message you portrayed with this story. The writing was good, but I like how you decided to tie in message with it. Great job, can't wait ...

Outstanding work. Truly enjoyed reading it, you conveyed the fear of it perfectly. Your imagery and words made me think that if I had that dream, I'd probably wet myself. ...