captaindomdude

Wow! Excellent work, you did an amazing job at writing this. It was fun and a light read, perfectly done. You described without boring your reader, and you kept things ...

It was a decent little story, and there weren't any extremely obvious grammar errors. However I had some issue with how you wrote it. At the beginning, that first paragraph, ...

I like the way you wrote it, it was professional, and the way you portray the idea makes it sound original. I didn't find any other grammar errors besides the ...

Whoo, Thanks so much to Deathcurrent for donating the points I needed Chapter 3 Part 2 Markus hurried the rest of the way down the hallway, the dark emptiness becoming ...

I know that this part is a little longer then what I would like, but I stopped when I felt I could. Feel glad that I didn't post the full ...

Excellent work, felt the emotion in the piece perfectly. You portrayed what is a hard issue for anyone and showed a very mature way of dealing with it.

Once again, amazing work. You progressed the plot very well, and even your 'violence and gore' was perfectly suited to the storyline. Definately can't wait for more.

Wow...the pain and emotion in this story is really there. This was a very dark piece, but you portrayed it well, and I feel sorry for the little girl. I ...

WOAH!!! Surprise ending! Very, very well done, I can honestly say I didn't expect that one. Great job on it, these last few chapters were nicely done. What else can ...

I honestly have to say that this one surprised me, and in a good way. I enjoy reading good old fashioned zombie survival and post nuclear stories as much as ...

I really liked the message you portrayed with this story. The writing was good, but I like how you decided to tie in message with it. Great job, can't wait ...

Once again, amazing work. I'm seriously enjoying your writing, I honestly feel like I am reading something by an extremely experienced author. Your imagery is just right, your plot is ...

Hey there reader, chapter 2 is now up in it's completion. You should read the prologue, chapter 1, and chapter 2 pt 1 before reading this, but hey, your choice. ...

you probably want to read the prologue and chapter 1 first, otherwise, Enjoy. Finally made managed to get chapter 2 up. The second part will posted right after this Chapter ...

Honestly, I feel like you did a decent job with this. Chapters one, two, and three had the plot progressing absurdly quickly, but otherwise it was okay. Your description of ...